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Fraser
2010-Sep-03, 01:00 AM
Gamma Ray Bursts (GRBs) are among the most energetic phenomenon astronomers regularly observe. These events are triggered by massive explosions and a large amount of the energy if focused into narrow beams that sweep across the universe. These beams are so tightly concentrated that they can be seen across the visible universe and allow astronomers [...]

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Spoons
2010-Sep-03, 02:37 AM
Second sentence needs an edit:

These events are triggered by massive explosions and a large amount of the energy if focused into narrow beams that sweep across the universe.

Should be "is", right?

Sorry to nitpick. Nice article though, love your work!

ETA: oh, and "as well as some regions of the Milky Way which more turbulence is present" (3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence) should have "Milky Way in which", or change the "which" for "where", yeah?