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banquo's_bumble_puppy
2006-Nov-08, 02:50 PM
Hands work yet love breaks.
The ignorant girls find truth.
Cats melt the slick birds.

(I cheated and used a haiku generator- don't feel very inspired at the moment)

Fazor
2006-Nov-08, 03:34 PM
October winds blow.
Frost melts in the morning sun.
The leaves are changing.

(I'm assuming haiku is 5,7,5. It's been a while so i forgot).

suntrack2
2006-Nov-08, 04:40 PM
in things the big is money
in topics I found astronomy

:)

Swift
2006-Nov-08, 05:59 PM
Frosty points of light
Stars in a winter sky
Beacons from infinity

Swift
2006-Nov-08, 06:00 PM
Mercury transit
Tiny dot across the vast sun
Hope for clear skies

01101001
2006-Nov-08, 06:26 PM
Bad Astronomy:
Egg balancing in the Spring.
Clunk. The idea falls.

foreignkid
2006-Nov-12, 06:27 PM
Steve Irwin is dead
He played with crocodiles,
Also an Aussie.

mahesh
2006-Nov-13, 10:37 AM
Mesopotamia man
he no like curds
get in his whey

One Day More
2006-Nov-14, 03:20 AM
The Roman World wakes,
A dark shadow has fallen:
Roman Empire falls.

Our living world
Clogged by deadly pollution.
Our dying world.

WaxRubiks
2006-Nov-14, 03:54 AM
Walk the tightrope now
make sure you don't fall too far
then rest in bouncy net

One Day More
2006-Nov-14, 04:11 AM
Always on the go,
People doing their careers.
Our busy world.

Swinging silently,
The old clock's pendulum sways,
Counting off seconds.

Caught in the headlights
Spookily the cat's eyes glowed
Like two golden coins.

Lick, bite, crunch, suck, nip
Colonies of summer bugs
Feast hungrily.

Roy Batty
2006-Nov-14, 01:07 PM
Bountiful rain falls
Giving life to many things
I get very wet
:)

One Day More
2006-Nov-14, 07:55 PM
One year nearly gone.
One more orbit around Sol.
One more month: Christmas

Eroica
2006-Nov-18, 08:53 AM
To express onself
In seventeen syllables
Is very diffic

Roy Batty
2006-Nov-18, 03:47 PM
To express onself
In seventeen syllables
Is very diffic
LOL! LO
L! LOL! LOL!
LOL! LO

SolusLupus
2006-Nov-18, 04:00 PM
I like the haiku!
I would write haiku myself.
But I'm not that good.

Lance
2006-Nov-19, 05:05 AM
Oh, it's a new game
Let's see what's going on here
Good, there's no llamas

WaxRubiks
2006-Nov-19, 05:34 AM
Is the Haiku five,
Then next seven syllables,
and last, five again?

Maksutov
2006-Nov-19, 11:14 AM
This is a haiku.
As dead leaves fall it has not
Any deep meaning.

epenguin
2006-Nov-19, 12:04 PM
What are haiku rules?
Not knowing them must make this
A bad example

Maksutov
2006-Nov-19, 02:16 PM
As poems, haiku rules,
The Spring rules are quite simple.
So follow the rules.

epenguin
2006-Nov-19, 03:13 PM
As poems, haiku rules,
The Spring rules are quite simple.
So follow the rules.

Hai. Now I know
How to stay within strict rules.
I make them up.

Eroica
2006-Nov-20, 03:02 PM
Where the sun's rays meet,
A cattle ranch called ''Focus''.
Deplorable pun!

A.DIM
2006-Nov-20, 03:43 PM
debunkery lives!
pseudoskepticism too!
mixed here in haiku!

:D

Maksutov
2006-Nov-20, 03:54 PM
Signals! Haiku one!
Haiku two! Hut! Haiku three!
Hut, hut, hut, hut, HUT!

A.DIM
2006-Nov-20, 04:56 PM
The thinking man's game
needs no gutteral grunting
to signal the play!

Maksutov
2006-Nov-20, 07:00 PM
The thinking man's game
Is a guaranteed cure for
Insomnia. Zzzzzz.

http://www.cosgan.de/images/smilie/muede/a030.gif

A.DIM
2006-Nov-20, 10:25 PM
Ah yes - turn off brain
don't like the thinking man's game
ah America!



Instead it's HUT HUT!
for a few seconds of what?
piles of big men, right?



Couldn't resist this
argue in form of haiku
sport for me and you!


:D

Swift
2006-Nov-21, 03:18 AM
No meteors
Clouds rule Mentor skies
Grey November

Eroica
2006-Nov-21, 09:33 AM
Expectations dashed.
November sky undisturbed.
Ah, the Leonids!

Arneb
2006-Nov-23, 08:16 PM
Do not mourn too long!
For in frigid December
Geminids loom bright.

Roy Batty
2006-Nov-23, 08:37 PM
A comet looms bright
We cannot see tomorrow
Triffids surround me! :eek:

Arneb
2006-Nov-24, 02:24 PM
Is that all you see?
In a tiny speck of dust
A whole Universe!

Peter Wilson
2006-Nov-29, 09:06 PM
Sitting at my desk
Writing a haiku poem
;) :p :D :razz: :eh:

jami cat
2006-Dec-03, 04:23 PM
Two Eggs and Bacon
Home Fries and Toast with Butter
Juice and coffee please



Im hungry now >:

One Day More
2007-Jan-10, 11:38 PM
Oh, too young to die!
'Great adventure' indeed not.
Many mothers wailed.