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Chunky
2008-Apr-05, 01:11 AM
please god
this life is taking hold.
i don't need this anymore my friend.
this day is getting old.

so gray is this world of men.
hearts black, rich with gold.
only seeing vengeance in
their lust, no control.

they've taken everything from me.
now asking me to side.
they've taken nothing
for life is nothing all i see are lies

please save me from this hell I'm in?
please god Ive done my time.
please save me from this torture within.
please, i beg, don't hide.

i will always be a friend within
if only you wish to confide.
i will stand with a friend,amen
please oh god its time..


Darkpoetry.com
2008 Chunky

Chunky
2008-Apr-05, 01:13 AM
this isnt about a debate nor a discussion of god. only a psalm ive made, im quiet happy with it. i wanted you to see.

you didnt delete the other post about darkpoetry(poetry related) soooooooooo i thought id go a step more.


step too far?

hope not.

anyways.

my head hurts man

Whirlpool
2008-Apr-05, 01:29 AM
After reading your poem , I have the impression that you are in some kind of trouble or something ?

But then, you posted after and you just want to show your piece.

Bu then again , are You Ok ?

:think:

Neverfly
2008-Apr-05, 01:59 AM
After reading your poem , I have the impression that you are in some kind of trouble or something ?

But then, you posted after and you just want to show your piece.

Bu then again , are You Ok ?

:think:

No. His head hurts, man.

Chunky
2008-Apr-05, 02:00 AM
No. His head hurts, man.

haha, nice

Whirlpool
2008-Apr-05, 02:13 AM
No. His head hurts, man.

Yeah..

Johnathan, did you bump your head somewhere?

:think:

Neverfly
2008-Apr-05, 02:22 AM
Yeah..

Johnathan, did you bump your head somewhere?

:think:

No, he used it.





:D I am sooo bad:D

Chunky
2008-Apr-05, 02:40 AM
Yeah..

Johnathan, did you bump your head somewhere?

:think:

no no i didnt.


it doesnt hurt anymore.