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Chunky
2008-Sep-25, 12:53 AM
if we are nothing now. never to be friends.
to be told so many times, never again.
to have you in heart. think of you in bed.
any idea how tortured ive been?
i feel you always, constantly i think.
i could have done better. its all a mistake.
here i am now.
with you in my dreams.
you in my eyes always do sing,
of us, of love, of memories long gone.
of trust above God, and his son.
i need to explain this to you.
you are my first, my love, my true.
from you my birth. my child, my moon.
my love never ending.
my love so true.
i love you

EDIT*** I so hate reading this.

Chunky
2008-Sep-25, 01:07 AM
i was told to change the name of the poem. but i couldnt do that. so i only left it unlisted here.

go to chunky.baywords.com to see the title.

mahesh
2008-Sep-25, 06:05 PM
i was told to change the name of the poem. but i couldnt do that. so i only left it unlisted here.

go to chunky.baywords.com to see the title.

you were told to change the title?

copyright restrictions wouldn't have allowed to do that.
anyway why change the original title?

you could always make your own title, but credit the original author, fully.
after having asked permission, of course.

i also suspect BAUT forum rules do not permit posting copy-righted material sans acknowledgement(s).

mahesh
2008-Sep-25, 06:13 PM
johnathan

just had a look....

quote:

4. Copyright

Do not post copyrighted material here. This is very serious. It is within the law to post small, relevant quotes, but not whole passages from newspapers, magazines, books, etc. If you do, the post will be deleted, and you will be warned. Do it twice and you will be banned. If you want to reference material somewhere else on the web, give a brief summary and link to the rest. People can go take a look at what you're talking about and then return to discuss it further.

i think, you've been careful enough....i think.

if you feel uncomfortable, edit to references

sarongsong
2008-Sep-25, 07:27 PM
...anyway why change the original title?...He's promoting his own site.

Fazor
2008-Sep-25, 07:37 PM
Yeah, I'm assuming the title was changed not because of copyrite, but because of BAUT rules for language, or something

Moose
2008-Sep-25, 07:58 PM
It was a specific religious reference that was a bit too close to partisan advocacy, Fazor. I saw it before it was altered.

Chunky
2008-Sep-25, 10:10 PM
you were told to change the title?

copyright restrictions wouldn't have allowed to do that.
anyway why change the original title?

you could always make your own title, but credit the original author, fully.
after having asked permission, of course.

i also suspect BAUT forum rules do not permit posting copy-righted material sans acknowledgement(s).


umm. i wrote it.

Chunky
2008-Sep-25, 10:12 PM
and yeah. Baut didnt like the title much. and i said like, i love ******* myself.
like what a bad woman does?

mahesh
2008-Sep-25, 10:23 PM
"I see". As the blind man said.

hey and the ads are back on!

Well johnathan, good luck with your poetry ventures......

Chunky
2008-Sep-25, 10:28 PM
also... you all can comment my blog.. you just need an email address and your first name. no account.. so yeah... :)

Chunky
2008-Sep-25, 10:29 PM
"I see". As the blind man said.

hey and the ads are back on!

Well johnathan, good luck with your poetry ventures......
ads? were they off? i never knew..

mahesh
2008-Sep-26, 01:55 AM
johnathan, thanks for the invite. i shall definitely visit. i didn't know.

yes, the ads have been brought back today. pardon my poor linking abilities....if you go to the top folder about BAUT, there's a thread by Fraser, 'UT is moving servers'...that'll explain the rebirth of ads, here.


umm. i wrote it.

i didn't know / realise this either. it's a nice poem, johnathan. it's impressive that you are able to put words together beautifully, emotionally. rare talent. rare gift.

i like poetry...wish i knew more languages, to be able to appreciate such feelings, expressed in them as well. though music from a multitude of other cultures e.g. Africa, is terrific too.

best regards

mahesh
2008-Sep-26, 01:19 PM
i went, i saw, ...doh...couldn't get in....

Chunky
2008-Sep-26, 06:47 PM
i went, i saw, ...doh...couldn't get in....


ummm click on the dates at the bottom left.

the archives.

suntrack2
2008-Sep-27, 04:53 PM
jonathan "poet et al",! very fine, is that your poem's site! wow, thanks.

Read the poem below:

sometime I like to compose poems
but subject is the matter,
the material is bound with the concepts,
there are boundaries for words,
but space is nice thing, where nothing is limited
only limit is our's, we can across the universe but by mind
because human mind is the fastest medium to go there and
again come back here.

Chunky
2008-Sep-28, 11:57 PM
jonathan "poet et al",! very fine, is that your poem's site! wow, thanks.

Read the poem below:

sometime I like to compose poems
but subject is the matter,
the material is bound with the concepts,
there are boundaries for words,
but space is nice thing, where nothing is limited
only limit is our's, we can across the universe but by mind
because human mind is the fastest medium to go there and
again come back here.

i love poetry.
lover.

Chunky
2008-Oct-05, 06:26 AM
Effort her. (http://chunky.baywords.com/2008/10/03/effort-her/)

I pray your hopes never fade.
not a false hope to believe in.
nor a friend to be leaving.
I hope you are always okay.
I pray your life is always lovely.
your days all above me
a love you can be with and praise.
I hope your faith is always perfect.
Their love never corrupting.
I hope you will sit down and pray.
for god to see this in you
a faith. I pray here with you.
I swear my love my child
Its okay

Chunky
2008-Oct-13, 04:18 AM
http://chunky.baywords.com/2008/09/08/inspiration/



another one i wanna ***** to you..

Chunky
2008-Dec-22, 06:57 AM
http://chunky.baywords.com/2008/11/10/lost/
........

mugaliens
2008-Dec-22, 11:08 AM
umm. i wrote it.

And I thought it was wonderful!

Very nicely done!

Chunky
2009-Feb-04, 12:40 PM
I am weak, nothing left.

Take my life, all these debts.

My sins be reformed.

take this soul please, its torn.